Friday, February 25, 2011

sense of time

alliteration

when i first met you where did we go
did we go over there or in the snow ?
all i ever hear you say
is that you want to go outside and play
no no no not today but when we do itll be ok
how did we end here what went wrong
did i say something stupid or was it that song

assonance- birds

a brightful day is a delightful day
not only does the sun come out, so does the birds
but when the birds start to fly away
then the rain comes in and drains it another day
out with the rain in with the sun
and finally as one of the birds blush, one of them seem to get flushed
not that the toliet is already going to bust
birdy go bye bye ! flush flush

Thursday, February 17, 2011

Parts of speech poem

The Pie
Tasty and Cremey
Baking and Eating
Apples On Top

Cinquain

ferrets
energenic
sleeps to much
likes to take things
mean thieves

Metaphor

Mom can i tell you something :
school and homework isnt that easy for me
I hate history and i feel out of place in science
theres really no way you can help me,
its gets so boring always learning about history
and man does it get cold and breezy.
I have a few people in there that i talk to,
but not my bestfriends
as i walk to the front room
you can hear click clat ,
click clat !
the hard floor makes the sound of my shoes
VERY LOUD !
but i manage to get though the days
but school and homework isnt that easy for me

Tuesday, February 15, 2011

Bestfriend

The qualitys in a bestfriend are important. My bestfriend is unique in many ways. Her appearance is very prissy. She really likes to wear coach and alot of other name brand things, she has her own place with her son deron. The things that i would say make her a good friend would be how honest she is with everything. Another thing would be that i trust her very much i feel like i can relate to her on alot of things as in family, school life style. No matter where we are we make fun out of something if its not just laughing for hours then its somewhere watching a movie. But everythings not always good of course like any friendship we fight and argue about dumb stuff share our emotions and just be there for one another.

Monday, February 14, 2011

simile

1. A calendar is like a mirror because it reflects whats going on
2. A sandwich is like a blanket because its comforts you
3. An ice cube is like a cookie because it craves some of your appetite
4. A knife is like a whisper because you cant feel being stabbed
5. Kissing is like a careful collision because to persons lips come together
6. taking a shower feels like a peeled grape.
7. eating slimy noodles feels like leftover spaghetti.
8. Falling in love sounds like nothing you can imagine because of how it makes you feel
9. A dentist’s drill feels like a chainsaw because of the sound
10. Tomato soup tastes like bleeding hearts because of the color


1.Having a bestfriend is like having a diary that gives advice
2.Getting an education is like feeling self worth because not everyone gets the chance
3.Having family is like a feeling you cant replace because once their gone their gone !
4.Being able to eat everyday is like having no worries because i know ill have something at the end of the day
5.Feeling like people care is like getting a since of joy because when you feel like no one cares its great to know they do
6.Being able to take a shower is like a feeling of being refreshed because  i feel and smell clean

Change poem

Winter

ice cold
rain
water
snow
slush

from
the
sky

Clear
white
Yellow

coming
down
like
cats
and
dogs

Auto Poem

Desiree
Honest, loving, helping, outgoing
sibling of Lashay Cmielewski
lover of ( animals, movies ) sleeping
Who feels happy when seeing family and friends
Who needs her cell phone everyday
Who gives her time, friendship and advice
Who fears spiders, being home alone and bug !
Who would like to see poverty to go away
Resident of Eagan Minnesota
Dugger

Wednesday, February 9, 2011

LimeRick- Rich Rock

throughout her life as a little rich kid
she dreamed of her career being oh so big
she picked up a rock
it had gold on the top
and now shes making money like never before

10 Years From Now

I will be walking in my beautiful home in another state , perferably somewhere was (Flordia, Georgia, Cali,Texas) I will have already finished 4 yrs of college hopefully 6 though. I will be working in the Medical field not really sure about doing what yet. Having been found the person I want to be would also be great. Im not very sure if i want kids they sometimes irritate me. I want to be living by blue/clear ocean water where i can see the animals in the water, and have a beach to lay by. The kind of house i would want would have to be big and beautiful, with at least 4 rooms huge living room and the most incrediable master bed room.

Tuesday, February 8, 2011

Ode -

 Oh Bed, You are all mine
When i climb in , i remeber your so soft and i start to sing a rhyeme
You make me feel Re-energized, calm, and happy
Even though your so high up
Tell me tell me is this only for me ?
Where I can take a deep sleep and fall into my dreams

Comfy, Soft, Large, Tall

Safe Place, Sleep,

Embarassing moment

One of my embarrassing momnets would have to be when i was at the grocery store and i was walking down the isle to grab something and the isle was packed!

Monday, February 7, 2011

Hiaku

Green elms in the woods
 standing tall and proud
The petals bend on the earth

Daily Post - RAWRRR

Once I see him looking at me I am aware of what I need to do RUN ! But I cant do that because of course he will attack me so I try and slowly walk away. When I make my way to the top of the hill I can see my friends waiting for me, little do they know I was about to be eaten alive. I run over to tell them my story and all of a sudden they started to laugh. A blank stare came over my face because I was confused on what they were lauging at then I glanced down and noticed I had no pants on. This was extremely embarassing. Not knowning what to say, I looked at them and said "how could you laugh at a time like this" I put on a serious face to make them feel somewhat bad for laughing.

Thursday, February 3, 2011

Memorable events

- Going on Judge Joe Brown
- Getting my license
- graduating school early
- having 6 jobs
- Getting my CNA certificate before i was 18
-  My animals dying
- Playing the

Best Place in the world / Worst Place

I think that the best place in the world to be would be somewhere tropical with NO SNOW! I really would enjoy living by water just because I like to layout by the sun, another reason would be because of how beautiful it is. I think there are many more things to do in the nice weather VS the cold. I wouldn’t want to live by myself though, so if I was too ever move I would want my family to come also. I feel like living somewhere tropical will help raisin your mood, because it’s known that the change of seasons will either strengthen or worsen someone’s depression. I think that the worst place would be is Rwanda. People die every day risking their life to get food or to collect pieces to help build a house. I learned last year that men sacrifice woman to go get dinner at night because the only consequence that happens to them is rape but for the men it’s being killed.

Wednesday, February 2, 2011

Free Writing

While taking this class I hope to gain better ways to express myself. Maybe this class can help me write out my feelings instead of expressing them in negative ways. My mom has a journal that she says helps her talk about her emotions without anyone judging her and she says it helps to sometimes go back and read how her previous days were, and the things that go one that might not be that big of a deal but something she'd still like to remember.